Pitch Reflection

My Power Point

My Presentation

My Q&A

Are there any areas you would give more detail on?

In my presentation i would give more detail on the lyrics slide because i just had the lyrics there and i didn't do in to much detail on what the song was about, so i could of explained verse by verse what the lyrics were saying and then from the lyrics what i could do in the music video for example in the narrative or using illustrating.Also i could of gone in to more detail on what the song is about and the story about the song for example instead of just saying its about a relationship i could of said it could be a past couple who broke up and the girl moved on and the ex is jealous so he is trying to find reasons why she should break up with her new boyfriend and maybe go back to the singer.

Strengths of my idea from feedback

from my feedback i found out that the strengths of my music video pitch were that i used good conventions from such as illustrating which is when the lyrics to the song match what what would be happening in the music video for example in my song when it says 'shes walking around in the middle of the night' you could have the girl in the music video walking around in the middle of the night.Another convention i choose to do was narrative this is when the music video has a story and tells a story for example in my song i could have the music video show us a story about the relationship the actors are in. The locations that i used were good as well because they are local which means that they will be easy to access and i should be able to record in all of the locations and also they are relevant to the song and the lyrics.

Areas of improvement for my idea from feedback

From my feedback i learnt that i could improve my idea but having a back up on one of the locations just incase i cant use it which is the school stage and i would over come this problem by either adding a green screen or by using the studio. Another part i could improve on is giving more detail on why i choose the song and what the song means.Another bit i could improve on is what i would use to show the conventions and why i choose the conventions which i could do by giving more detail on that section of the pitch.

Changes to be made

The changes that i will make to my idea are that i will be adding more detail in to certain slides and explain them more such as the lyrics slide where i will explain them more and say more on what the songs story line is.I will add more to the conventions slide by explaining how i would be using them in my music video and in my idea.Also i will need to think about what i will need to do if i cant use the school stage to record the performance part then i will need to think and find another place to use to record the performance part of my music video.